Different people have different hobbies. Some like singing, some like playing and others like collecting. I like collecting things, too. But I dont like collecting stamps or coins. And instead, I like collecting cartoon books drawn by Japanese. I like them because the pictures in the books are all very beautiful, and many stories are exciting and nice. Many parents and teachers dont think that the cartoon books are very good for students, but I dont agree with them. I know some of them are not good, but just some. Beauty always needs to be discovered. The books include many kinds of life and spirit, and also many things we have never heard about before. Besides that, I also like collecting beautiful pictures, VCDs, photos, etc. When I see some good things, Ill save money for them. When its enough, Ill buy them and bring them home. I always put them on a shelf and keep them clean and tidy.

教师评语：
Very well written. It is important to have a hobby and it seems that you really enjoy collecting these books. However, you must make sure that your hobby doesnt take the place of your studies.